After the light has faded
I still stay here;
Thinking of you;
Knowing it’s over;
Hitting the atmosphere.
(c) 2008
Hitting The Atmosphere
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Poetry & Icecream
October 11, 2011 at 7:33 am
Melancholic and poignant. I love the picture too
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 12, 2011 at 1:13 am
Thank you very much, it took me a long time to find a suitable image
Ina
October 11, 2011 at 10:22 am
Beautiful, both image and poem
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 12, 2011 at 1:13 am
Thank you.
dsnake1
October 11, 2011 at 2:17 pm
this is a beautiful piece of work.
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 12, 2011 at 1:11 am
Thank you very much!
The Noiseless Cuckooclock
October 11, 2011 at 7:10 pm
short and lovely.
I see what you see in your words.
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 12, 2011 at 1:06 am
Thank you! I originally wrote a long poem, but that’s all that survived.
terri0729
October 12, 2011 at 7:32 am
This is a great poem and I love the picture!
Peace and blessings, Terri