Thank you I’m finding it hard to write poems about my boyfriend; I usually only write about negative things! I’m getting there, slowly. He’s worth immortalising in words.
Glad I could make you smile His mother died a few years ago, from cancer. I think in a way, I’m taking over a slight motherly role for him, without even realising. I’m unconsciously looking after him.
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lolamouse
October 17, 2011 at 7:25 pm
Sensual and beautiful!
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 18, 2011 at 3:07 pm
Thank you
I’m finding it hard to write poems about my boyfriend; I usually only write about negative things! I’m getting there, slowly. He’s worth immortalising in words.
Susie Clevenger
October 17, 2011 at 7:42 pm
Sensual…like the reference to his/her mother…that made me grin
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 18, 2011 at 3:08 pm
Glad I could make you smile
His mother died a few years ago, from cancer. I think in a way, I’m taking over a slight motherly role for him, without even realising. I’m unconsciously looking after him.
Morning
October 18, 2011 at 2:10 am
perfect.
love it.
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 18, 2011 at 3:08 pm
Thank you! Perfect is awesome to hear considering I wrote it in about 20 seconds.
Evelyn
October 18, 2011 at 2:12 am
That last line, wow, sensual, powerful.
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 18, 2011 at 3:09 pm
Thank you, I like the last line. It was supposed to be a much longer poem, but it felt right to end there. It’s all which needed saying, really.
syreil
October 18, 2011 at 3:11 am
“you’re my perfection.”
ah, perfect words.
you can read my post for Gooseberry Garden Poetry:
After Midnight
thanks!
halfwaybetweenthegutter
October 18, 2011 at 3:10 pm
Thanks for reading! I’ll go check out your post now.