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[luhv] noun, verb, loved, lov·ing. noun 1. a profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.

17 Oct

Your mother said you had pianist’s hands

and I agree

when

you

touch

me.

 

Skin on skin, you’re my perfection.

(c) 2011

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Posted by on October 17, 2011 in Poetry

 

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10 responses to “[luhv] noun, verb, loved, lov·ing. noun 1. a profoundly tender, passionate affection for another person.

  1. lolamouse

    October 17, 2011 at 7:25 pm

    Sensual and beautiful!

     
    • halfwaybetweenthegutter

      October 18, 2011 at 3:07 pm

      Thank you :) I’m finding it hard to write poems about my boyfriend; I usually only write about negative things! I’m getting there, slowly. He’s worth immortalising in words.

       
  2. Susie Clevenger

    October 17, 2011 at 7:42 pm

    Sensual…like the reference to his/her mother…that made me grin :)

     
    • halfwaybetweenthegutter

      October 18, 2011 at 3:08 pm

      Glad I could make you smile :) His mother died a few years ago, from cancer. I think in a way, I’m taking over a slight motherly role for him, without even realising. I’m unconsciously looking after him.

       
  3. Morning

    October 18, 2011 at 2:10 am

    perfect.

    love it.

     
    • halfwaybetweenthegutter

      October 18, 2011 at 3:08 pm

      Thank you! Perfect is awesome to hear considering I wrote it in about 20 seconds.

       
  4. Evelyn

    October 18, 2011 at 2:12 am

    That last line, wow, sensual, powerful.

     
    • halfwaybetweenthegutter

      October 18, 2011 at 3:09 pm

      Thank you, I like the last line. It was supposed to be a much longer poem, but it felt right to end there. It’s all which needed saying, really.

       
  5. syreil

    October 18, 2011 at 3:11 am

    “you’re my perfection.”
    ah, perfect words. :)

    you can read my post for Gooseberry Garden Poetry:
    After Midnight

    thanks!

     

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