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Meant to be – the 10 second poem.

15 Nov

I dreamt that you were alive,

that he had never left me,

and that my childhood was fantasy.

Forgive me.

For being happy.

This is how it was meant to be.

(c) 2011.

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Posted by on November 15, 2011 in Poetry

 

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17 responses to “Meant to be – the 10 second poem.

  1. autumnsunshine124

    November 15, 2011 at 3:31 am

    I like your writing it’s down to earth and honest and a 10 second poem is super :)

     
    • halfwaybetweenthegutter

      November 15, 2011 at 3:45 am

      Thanks! That’s a huge compliment. I was just sitting here feeling a bit sorry for myself, and wondered what I could do with 10 seconds of my life. It’s better than procrastinating.

       
  2. heyloworld

    November 15, 2011 at 3:37 am

    wow.Just wow.

     
  3. heyloworld

    November 15, 2011 at 3:40 am

    I love your poem….and i tried to comment….but somehow it logs in from wrong accounts.

     
  4. heyloworld

    November 15, 2011 at 3:42 am

    PS–my actual blog is http://dreamsflow.wordpress.com/poetry/
    and heyloworld is just the username…

     
    • halfwaybetweenthegutter

      November 15, 2011 at 3:44 am

      Thank you, and it seems to have worked. I’ve had a couple of people say comments aren’t working properly – typical :p

       
  5. Morning

    November 15, 2011 at 3:53 am

    smart one.
    ;)

     
  6. manicddaily

    November 15, 2011 at 4:33 am

    A very stark and powerful poem. K.

     
  7. polidn

    November 15, 2011 at 6:41 am

    that’s the spirit. :)

     
  8. Nel

    November 15, 2011 at 10:06 am

    Forgive me.

    For being happy.

    It’s heartbreaking to have to ask for forgiveness for happiness. A lovely piece, nonetheless.

     
  9. Today in the past

    November 15, 2011 at 10:45 am

    A lovely poem, and a lovely idea. Is it okay if I steal the idea for my project? <3
    (www.project1112.wordpress.com)

     
  10. Daydreamertoo

    November 15, 2011 at 10:53 am

    Yes, we are meant to be happy. We get one shot at this and it is not other people’s job to make us happy, we have to be happy first with our own selves and then others add to that happiness.
    I have Lupus (SLE) and it took them over 5 years to diagnose and I had various specialists telling me that it was psychosomatic and that everything I was telling them maybe all in my head. Thankfully I had a great family doctor who knew me better. She persisted until they finally discovered it by more blood work. It sucks being ill, having an illness but, at least then I knew ‘they’ knew it wasn’t all a fantasy.
    Live your life as best you can, do what you can do to make it the best it can be. Take any meds you’re supposed to take. Be in control of it all. Research the meds, find out which are the best and less side effects and that way at least you’ll feel as if you have some sort of control over it too.

    As for the poem, it’s fabulous!

     
  11. belfastdavid

    November 15, 2011 at 12:44 pm

    A poem which brought a smile to my face.

    Thank you for that

    David

     
  12. The Cello Strings

    November 15, 2011 at 1:53 pm

    everyone wants to be happy.

    you are forgiven by God.
    Cheers.

     
  13. Poets Rally

    November 17, 2011 at 4:04 am

    right to the point, well done.

    join us today, have fun!

     
  14. Emilino Emloile

    December 14, 2011 at 2:26 am

    Wow, this one’s very striking.

     

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