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We’re not like that

05 Jun

We thought this was all we’d need:
tangled limbs, false smiles,
pretending we were still happy.

It couldn’t end;
“we’re not like that”.
But we were, all too often.

And what do we have to show for it?
I ask myself, and the answer
never quite came apparent.

We thought it was all we could need,
sweaty hands, bruised lips,
but we’re not like that.

(c) 2007

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15 Comments

Posted by on June 5, 2012 in Every day life

 

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15 responses to “We’re not like that

  1. judithatwood

    June 5, 2012 at 3:09 am

    Hi, and lots of love from a very rainy Maine. This is a poignant, powerful poem — as always, even then you knew the right words. Thanks for sharing these feelings with us. 8-)

     
  2. manicmacca

    June 5, 2012 at 3:13 am

    Short an sweet yet it say’s so much In so little word’s .. Hope your ok hun??? all my love Brian.xx

     
  3. manicmacca

    June 5, 2012 at 3:16 am

    1 more thing an just a thought but maybe some of these may put a smile on your face…

    http://manicmaccasbipolar.wordpress.com/funny-stuff/ ;)

     
  4. anotherbattle

    June 5, 2012 at 4:47 am

    I enjoy reading your blog so I’ve nominated you for a Reader Appreciation Award. http://anotherbattle.wordpress.com/2012/06/05/43/

     
  5. ryoko861

    June 5, 2012 at 12:36 pm

    True words!

     
  6. JKBradley

    June 5, 2012 at 1:33 pm

    My oh my, struck a chord. Thanks for sharing.

     
  7. whereimstaying

    June 5, 2012 at 9:36 pm

    Oh I love this. Awesome post!

     
  8. Kay Salady

    June 13, 2012 at 12:53 pm

    Yes, it is sad how we realize they are the right words years later. Your writing touches the core of an aching heart as I am sure its roots began there.

     

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